If you read the old post, well this is the final version (for now).
"Show and Tell"
Can't help
but come
undone
before your eyes,
I'll show you everything,
want to show you
everything,
want you
to see it all,
my body
and my soul,
carnal
and
spiritual
beauty,
stare at me in awe,
tell me you love me,
come closer,
touch me,
before I cover up,
before I fade away,
before I realize
maybe it was a mistake,
maybe it's wiser
to let you fantasize,
come closer,
hold me,
before I've vanished,
before I'm banished,
before I realize
maybe I should wait,
wait a little longer
to see if you linger,
to see if you stay
before I show and tell.
©drvodka2005
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2 comments:
very nice! Someone said to me once that the secret of poetry is in what you don't say. You have done a darn good job minimizing your involvement with the picture you want to paint. Beautiful.
thanks, glad u enjoyed it...i was worried it was too simple.
the drawings...yes...they are large so hard to scan. Will have to take a digital photo of some to post here.
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