he's a charmer
twisting his words
like lemons
watching her swallow
praying it goes down
like lemonade
not like the sour acid
that will corrode
her heart.
drvodka05
Friday, December 16, 2005
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Our minds love to contemplate, create, debate at all hours. A playground not found on maps - an abstract playground. But it depends on YOU to allow it to play. Awaken your mind!
3 comments:
i really like this one.
he's a charmer
twisting his words
the opening line is strong. i love the visual.
gracias Santiago! i thought of twisting and then the lemon image followed.
makes me think of the saying enseniate hacer limonda.
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