i worried when
i used the word
"love" with "you"
i waited for you
to combine them first.
i remember
the first time
when we both
used "love" with "you".
the words bounce from
your lips to mine,
back to yours...
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5 comments:
Lovely write! Heartbreaking even.
thanks Freak!...or xfreak....or freakx ;)
Respect, really nice words.
"the words bounce from
your lips to mine,
back to yours..."
great
Generally, your poems are more than one read worth.
lovely!
Sundancer,
welcome! thank you for reading and for the compliment :)
Analisa,
Nice to see you on my electronic pages! I don't see you patrolling around these parts that often ;)
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